1999Elias's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mr-Riot-NG B-DayFacation]

Facts:
1. The AA-12 (like the name says) is a .12-gauge automatic shotgun, not a rifle.
2. I just saw that agent was sleeping just the second time I saw the short because he's not even with his head falling, and to help the ZZZ letters are black in a dark background.
3. No reason for a cake be nowhere in a building with some "agents".
4. WTF ending.
5. You made a gift for your own birthday???
My comment isn't useless, unless you prove me I'm wrong about this few problems of the animation, that could be in a bigger number like I did in Kenamii Giftination: http://1999elias.newgrounds.com/reviews/
Like I said before, skills are nothing in an animation if you have inteligence and originality.
Peace.

Mr-Riot-NG responds:

I didn't mention that. but thanks for the tip...

[Kenamii Giftination]

Not only some but much problems with this movie, starting with:
1. Djjaner said that you used his sprites without his permission, no matter if you credited him.
2. You used my animated blowback animation... you're so bad that can't animate a simple blowback action?
3. Music didn't matched even 1% of the "movie".
4. The bullet lines, that was copied from someone (ZaracaM I guess), were totally wrong, its effect was horizontal, but it wasn't animated at exactly 90º, and it got horrible.
5. Unoriginal name: Kenamii GIFTINATION? Again? Dang think on a name for it before start animating.
6. The character types (possessed agent and zombies) didn't affect their behaviour.
7. Kenamii shooted like 20 rounds on the beginning, but hit only 6 of them.
8. The zombie blood all over the floor was separated and looks like it has 2 trails.
9. When the guy from Time to Madness appeared, Kenamii waited until he points his revolver to him (reminds me of Dragon Ball Z somehow).
8. At 00:29, it's possible to see that Kenamii actually has 4 hands.
9. The revolver blowback was so big that it actually made the Time to Madness guy go backwards.
10. Who's dumb enough to die with Auditor's Halo powers?
11. Why the Time to Madness protagonist had Auditor's Halo???
12. The feet were a movie clip all the time (I saw your news post :3)
13. Kenamii's Sniper disappeared when he entered the last room.
14. No reason for Ellvis and your character be in a building with almost no one, and with only enemies.
15. no smoothness at any part of the movie.
The good is that at least you gave credit after using all of that. But, if you really want to make a gift movie to a friend, why use things you don't have permission to?

[Happy Birthday Kenamii]

Hahah, You always impress me xD
I laughed hard with the cake :P
It's nice to see you're still making things, no matter if it's short or not, they are made with love and received with the same love :)
Happy birthday my bro @Kenamii :D

Ellvis responds:

Thank you Elias, my bro :D

[MrSharpSword B-Day]

Too short, no MP5 and MP7 sound, you didn't credited me and Ellvis (QBZ-95 and the Background), not fitting music, and horrible ending (why there was a "nuclear box" on a building "full" of agents? Also how can a damn box shoot a laser beam from nowhere and explode the place?).
I was about to give no stars, but after all I think I can't do it anyways.

[False things must perish]

@Thekillerax you said everything, and yup, of course: "Hank doesn't seems to be the type that kills just because he wants to", the man from Madness Combat universe that could match with no problems this in mind is Tricky after being, let's say, "Corrupted" in Madness Depredation.
For me, this animation isn't saying "Hank kills just for fun" or something, but istead I think it's trying to leave another idea, I just didn't find it still :P
That was an amazing job Stagnate, I can't explain how much happy I'm to see something new and interesting, something that even without a story behind, left me with no choice but wait till the (maybe) sequel gets posted :)
Keep it up! ;D

[Sad Slender Man Story]

I'm sure lots of Slender fans will love this.
The animation is smooth, well made, and the lines hadn't the problem of the brush tool :P
5 stars, great job ;)

[Mad-mas]

The animation quality is very good, sounds were ok, but the main 2 reasons of my low rating is that there's:
No Background: Just a division between ground and sky.
No Story or script: It's just a killing scene in which a mad man tries to kill a man.
No relation to christmas: About christmas I just saw a X-mas hood on the protagonist, plus we are in febuary :P

This is considered as a test, something you make to improve your ability of animating, but tests aren't whole movies, so please, if possible, don't post tests on the portal :)

[Teaching a TM]

Graphics: The animation was very well drawed, remembers me of @Djjaner 's drawing style (brush tool).
Speed: Actually, I understand that if you have used a better speed to the video, the video would have even less duration.
Voices: The voices quality weren't good, probably a new microphone would help.
The Joke: Hum... yeah,... I wasn't expecting that just a simple joke was going to be used, I expected something new, not a joke you see almost all the time in movies like Tom and Jerry, etc.
Just 3/5 stars.

[Madness:Christmasmination]

Almost facedesked but forgot that I'm using a notebook now.
Sorry, but like the smart guy from below said, I just watched 2 guys (that I thought that were the same before an certain "update"), and some dancing animations from other animators.
Just 1.5 stars, the maximum I can give.

[Madness Jebus tests]

First of all, please, don't upload tests on the portal man.
And about the tests, the movements were good, but there were some objects that didn't move like Jebus himself (not his hands) etc.
If you want to show everyone your tests, click on the square above (with a box and an white arrow as icon), that's your Dumping Grounds, there you can upload your tests as .swf files, and if you wanna show them to the public, copy the link of the dump then make a post with the same.
Hope it helps.

MR-Projects responds:

Thanks, i was working on a big project but my laptop got broken and i don't have my files anymore