Yes, i agree with Jounaz, the movement was smooth and well done, you added your own shot colour which was a nice touch, the only two things you would improve on is the head movement, at the fact that most of your characters have more realistic faces, i.e eyes and mouths.
in this one, you only had the mouth, so, i don't know if its me or something else, but the no eyes thing just looked a bit strange.
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Well, at first thanks for your comment, and, about the eyes, I was looking a bit drunk with them, so I removed out, and just leave the mouth to people differ my expression from everyone, like I already tried to make my character without mouth and it just got, ugh. :D
Cool test man!! :3
Thanks, but like I said to Elias-Z, say what I can improve, I want to see how I improved :D
Cool testie ~
Thanks, but plz next time say what I can improve, I want to know what you people think about my skills :3
The only thing you could improve for now is the way you animate walking.
Yah, my biggest problem :\, thanks for the comment through ;)
awesome man i like how you spin the gun like a badass
Haha, thanks, I love doing this with my lego and my video-game guns :3, but plz next time say what I can improve. ;)
coincidencia pura.
e eu acho que ta bom, mas vc podia dar um pouco mais de movimentos na cabessa
e no resto do corpo tb, lol.
Ok then i guess try moving the body more
I expect that, like I was on a hurry but wanted to animate a bit, so I made this test :P
Good one, flips the pistol like a boss.
Oh jeez, forgot to fan you...
Thanks :D
Nah it's ok ;)
mmm......
A longer testie?
lol, I mean the animation, what I can improve on animating :P
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Recoil seems kinda poor, and madness combat characters usually move around with their movements. Like if hank were to swing a sword, his body would move back as he swung back and then lunge forward as he slashed ahead.
Yea, the body movements are my biggest problem xP. Also, just now that I seen, the recoil here was so much fast :P. Thanks!
Jounaz
Really nice and smooth, but you could improve the movement of his head. It would make the animation look more "alive" :D
(Btw, I hope you understand my english...)
1999Elias
I understand the english of everyone like almost everyone understand my one xD.
The head movement when walking is still a problem to me, I still don't know what to do xP. Thanks!